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aneela


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aao tumhain apna hum raaz benai
din ki apnhi ajj kahnai sunai

beetain hoe kal kal ki ik ik baat
beghair rukai rawani sai sunai

muhabbaton ki koi kami nahi humain
na tha shaoor jub sai mili hai humain

inhi muhabbaton main palay berhian hain hum
phir ik dem sai jawan hoe hai hum

ird gird phir nazar dorai hum nai
logo sai dosti berhai hum nai

rawan dawan thai kai ik hadsa ho giya
na socha tha jo wo sub kuch ho giya

wo tha ajnabi per apna apna laga
us ka muskarata chehra acha lega

ijazat na li dil main dakhil ho giya
mera din mera na reha us ka ho giya

khuwab aankhon main phir bannai lagai
hum roz sajnai lagai sanwerna lagai

intezaar reta tha us ka her din
soch ti thi kaisai reh paon gi us bin

muntezir thi main us kai izhaar ki
un alfaz ki us iqrar ki

najanai kion jhijegta tha wo
kehna chahta tha jo kah na paya tha wo

us ki ana nai kuch bolnai na diya
meri sheram nai moo kholnai na diya

diya umeed ka jelta reha
mera intezar phir berhta reha

dino ko guzarna tha guzartai gai
faslain dermiyan main berhtai gai

intezar jub taweel ho nai lega
waqt kai khonai ka ahsaas ho nai laga

phir ik din her nata tor liye hum nai
ik naya rishta phir jor liya hum nai

jis din piya gher jana tha main nai
na reh pai ga meraio bin ye mana tha us nai

doli uthi phir main rukhset hoi
meri qader us ko us weqt hoi

us ki mujboori kuch keh na paya
juda ho giya muh sai mera ho na paya

zindegi us ko taweel si lag rehi hai
meri kami ab shiddet sai leg rehi hai

tanha rehtai rehtai jub ukta giya wo
dard apnai dil ka mujh ko suna giya wo

main thi mujboor kuch ker na pai
tasalli kai do bol bhi na keh pai

BUZDIL hain wo jo na keh pain dil ki baat
sisektai hoe phir guzarti hai unki raat

ye thi app beti jo app nai perhi thi
na kijiye ga wo ghelti jo hum nai ki thi

pasand aai koi to haal din ka sunai ussai
intezaar buhut keraya hai ab na azmain ussai

abhi waqt haath main hai faida uthain
kai kahi humari terah app na tanha reh jain


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mikee


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yeh poem  matric board ka liye hai ya intermediate ???? or   prep kay liye



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jis ki bhi hai ...hai buhat pyaari poem :):)

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chehrah eik phool ki tarhah shahdaab hai .. chehra uss ka hai ya koi meh taab hai.. chehrah jaisay ghazal.. chehrah janay ghazal..chehrah jaisi kali.. chehrah jaisay kawal..chehrah jaisay tasswar ki tasweer bhi.. chehrah eik khaab bhi.. chechrah tabeer bhi...aafreen aafreen..

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Kitnay din beet gayay hain daikho to sahi
kitnay chiraagh bujhe gayay hain daikho to sahi

Mausam bahar ka phir tanhaa guzar geya
khizaan ek bar phir agaie hai daikho to sahi

Kitni chahat say likhta tah mai naam tumhara
wo qalam hi tordh dia hai zara daikho to sahi

Itni asaani say to milti nahi nafrat bhi laykin
tum nay hasil shuda piyar thukradia daikho to sahi

Anchal mai apnay chupayay thaie motee bohat
ab k zabte tutnay say saylaab ravan hai daikho to sahi

Ana rokti hai mujhay har bar jhuknay say magar
kitni bar tumnay jhukhaya hai daikho to sahi

Faqeer ban kar teray kuchay mai akar Aye *-----*
kitni aas say daikhtay hain tumhain daikho to sahi



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nice work



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Ye samajh kai sach jana hum nai teri baton ko, itnay pyaray hont jhoot kesai bolain gai ..!

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" chehrah eik phool ki tarhah shahdaab hai .. chehra uss ka hai ya koi meh taab hai.. chehrah jaisay ghazal.. chehrah janay ghazal..chehrah jaisi kali.. chehrah jaisay kawal..chehrah jaisay tasswar ki tasweer bhi.. chehrah eik khaab bhi.. chechrah tabeer bhi...aafreen aafreen.."
       marhaba !!!

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Aneela kuch ziyada lambi naseeehat kardi hai tum nay.. poem ki shakal ikhtiyar karli hia is nay..

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really?

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Shakhsiyat-e-khaas k bhi kuch andaz hoa karte hain
Band kitab k bhi kuch raaz hoa karte hain
In ko janne ki kabhi koshish na karna
Aisi kitabon main bhi kuch daagh hoa karte hain
Na le imtehaan too mujh se is tarah
In adaaon k bhi kuch alfaaz hoa karte hain
Lagta nahi durr humen tum jaise logon se
Ab tu tum jaise log humare saath hoa karte hain


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Originally posted by: koolpassion4u
"Aneela kuch ziyada lambi naseeehat kardi hai tum nay.. poem ki shakal ikhtiyar karli hia is nay.."






to cool main nai poem kai zereeaiye hi naseehat ki hai na


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to cool main nai poem kai zereeaiye hi naseehat ki hai na
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aray to pehlay batana tha na ..

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nice poetry !

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Raza


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Agar Hum Ek Hojaate


Kisi ka kya bigarr jaata agar hum ek hojaate

hamesha ki tarhan Suraj mashriq se nikalta

aur hamesha ki tarhan shab bhar sitare jagmagaate

aur baharon main Gul-o-bulbul mehakte aur chehekte


Kisi ka kya bigarr jaata agar hum ek hojaate

na main gumsum raha karta na tum phirte akele

na jeewan main kami rehti na aankhon main nami rehti

na mausam roothay hum se na roz-o-shab giraan hote

guzarte pal humain yun hasrat se dekha nahi karte

agar hum ek hojaate to roohon main bebasi jo paayi jaati hai

khalish si zindagi main phir pas-e-ehsaas kyun rehti

koi hasrat nahi rehti koi bhi aas kyun rehti

haan uddasi paas kyun rehti

Kisi ka kya bigarr jaata agar hum ek hojaate


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Nice poem!!

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zeberde4st raza bhai
ahhan to app ye shoq bhi rekhtai hain
good

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Buhat time hia !!!!

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Buhat time hia !!!!

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Raza


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thanks..

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aneela


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"Buhat time hia !!!!"







kool app na bola hi na
kerain
forum per post kernai hi aatain hain
or merai pass to buhut time hai
kisi ko udhar chahiye to lai lain
mera time hi nahi guzarta


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"Buhat time hia !!!!"

yaar muneeb............yeh ZAUQ waley logon keh kaam hain............


newyz nice work by both of u.........aneela..........n raza BHAII



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thank u bobby


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ur welcome!

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thanks !

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aneela baaji ke pass bahuttttth tame he tame hai... 24 ghantay he farigh aurkaat hootay hian meri baaji ke pass.. laalalalala...

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aneela


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app jaisai ko liye nahi hai
i9s lie apni chonch bend rekhain


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"app jaisai ko liye nahi hai i9s lie apni chonch bend rekhain "

yes aneela is qisam kay logon kay sath kuch ais hi kia jata hay bulkay is say bhi zada


wasaiy yeh yeh kuan jo app ko apni har post mein universal baj bana raha hay



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aneela


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yes aneela is qisam kay logon kay sath kuch ais hi kia jata hay bulkay is say bhi zada
wasaiy yeh yeh kuan jo app ko apni har post mein universal baj bana raha hay"







peta nahi
zeberdesti ka bhai hain
waisai merai net per bhaio ki tadaat berh ti jarehi hai
her teesra hekhs behn benanai ko teyyar
hai
jub main net choroon gi na to ik so ik bhai hoon gai merain


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" peta nahi zeberdesti ka bhai hain waisai merai net per bhaio ki tadaat berh ti jarehi hai her teesra hekhs behn benanai ko teyyar hai jub main net choroon gi na to ik so ik bhai hoon gai merain "
koi baat nahi.............sab se eidi wasool karlena...........kuch to faida hoga............

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" peta nahi zeberdesti ka bhai hain waisai merai net per bhaio ki tadaat berh ti jarehi hai her teesra hekhs behn benanai ko teyyar hai jub main net choroon gi na to ik so ik bhai hoon gai merain "

itnay behnoo ki aik hi behna hay chaloo koi nai aik faida to hay na kay koi bhi larka tum say badtamizi nahin ker sakta kuin kay har gali kay nuker per aik bhai majood hay


wasiay bobboy ka idea bhi bura nahin hay try kero eid anay hi wali hay



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