din raat jub mehnet ka faida na hoa to hum ne apne aglai pechlai pai dali nezer kai ghelti kehan kaisai kis terah hoi to maloom hoa kai pehla hi hurf ghelat tha:
Jo ek ghalti karey woh anjaan jo do ghalti karey woh nadan jo 3 ghaltiyaan karey woh shiataan jo ghaltiyon per ghalti karey woh Hindutan jo her ghalti maaf karey woh Pakistan
buhat pyaaar kartay hain tum ko Sanam ... QAsam chahay lai lo tumahri Qasam ....... hongay na ab juda hum.................... kyunkai milay hi kabhi thay hum ........ kia jori hia mR.lonely miss lonely...... SUbhanALLAH .....SUbhALLAH...MAsHALLAH !
mujhe peta nehi tha humarai college main achay khasay chor mojood hain main ne apni shairi kehain tha or app itna uddas kion hain mr app ki khurrant mrs app juldi milai gi inshallah
oh BEHAN Course meri SAri behnain fill hian bAs AIk KHAALA ZAad behan ka iNTizzar tha WOH bhi OPPPar walay nay pOORa KArdya Thnkx ANEELa :)). ANd DAt MR.lonEly mISs.lonely pOEM was FOR EVilKARma if U REad it OUT whoLE ??? NEva MIND ;) !!!
kebhi meri muhabbet per yeqeen ker kai to dekhtai kebhi mujhe say tum baat ker kai to dekh tai kitni asani say keh diya kai mujh ko bhool jao merai dil per chupy apni tesweer ko to dekhtai becher kai mujh say kia tum khush reh seko gai ik baar apne dil main jhank ker to dekhtai mujhe dosro ko samne beneqab ker kai meri aankh main chupi heya ko to dekh tai mujh ko bednaam ker tai rehai sare jehan main ik baar amne aiboo per nezer dal ker to bekhtai mujh ko qosoor war therakai kia tum mutmain ho apne zemeer say tum poch ker to dekh tai merai jelai haath per merhem lega ker to dekhtai ik hi pal mai bewafa benadiya hum ko ai hemsefer kebhi hemain aazma ker to dekh tai
muhebbet kai sefer main dushwaria to aati hain ye kehan ka insaaf hai kai aaghaz hi main raasta bedel laitain hain log
becher ker kisi say kisi ko kuch nehi milta feqat umer bher ki yaad muhebbat ka sila ben jati hain
plz give some comments abt my shairi laikin remember apne tareef nehi ker ni tenqeed ker ni hai kai mezeed kia behter ker sekti hoon jis ko shairi say intrest hai unkai liye keh rehi hoon baqion kai9 liye koi zeber desti nehi hai kai der ker comments da dain kai aleena ne keha hain to jawab dena pre ga lol
1st shairy peh tanqeed nahin hoti islaah hoti hai.Tanqeed tab ki jaati hai jab aapki shairi ka mauzu mutanaza ho aur jahan tak tumhari shairi hai, seriously ager yeh tumhari hi hai to itni kam age mein aisei shairi buhat achi hai. Bas kuch jaghon peh shair bewazan lagey, wahan theek karo N I CAN MENTION THEM AS WELL
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Dont Stay....Forget our memories....Forget our possibilities....Take all your faithlessness with you....Just give me myself back and....Don't Stay
app mention ker daitai to ziada acha ho ta mujhe logo kao haath jornai per tai hai n kai kia ghelti hai beta do but un ko haeran ho nai say furset nehi milti meri shairi merai mizaj sai buhut mukhtelif hai serious main kebhi ho ti nehi keha itni ghengeen bus is liye koi yeqeen nehi ker ta kisi or ko chori mera apna bhai bhi kehta hai kai ye shair weha perah tah ye weha
thank u mr cyrus merai zindegi main alreadi buhut khush ya mojood hai mujhe mezeed kisi ki zerooret nehi or haan aainda mujh sai is terah baat nehi keri ga mujhe semejhne main ghelti ker rehai hai app merai pass in batoon ka time nehi so plz we r forum members nothing else
oh Common apnay tu DIl pai lai liya main tu bAS aapki sahiri kai barey keh rha tha sirf aapko thora tang karnay kai liye but shayad aap SERious hian har tarah se aapkai pass in cheezon ka waqt nahi but meri zindagi main is ka buhat important role hia tabhi main Thora HANShi khUSHi se bAAt karta hoon ab mujhe kia pata tha mere is mAZAk say mera JUNior mujh say NARAAAZ hojayegha :(( so im extremely SOORrY MISs ANEELA agar aapko bura lagah tu aainda i will takcare but kia karoon yeh DIL HIA KAI MANTA nahi :)).
nahi yAAr bobby is mian CONtrol ki bAAt hi nahi ANEEla kuch zyada hi hurt hui hhia shayad is lye is nay FORUm bhi chordiya hia ab tak reply nahi aaya MISS Aneela IM EXtrremely SORRY :$:$:$:$:$:$ agar meri wajah say aap ko DUkh hua hia tu i PROMISE aaj kai bAAd aap say aisay baat nahi kaorngha....NEVAEVA !!!
nehi mr cyrus m,ain ne bura nehi mana ye merai liye nai baat nehi hain wo actuaaly teen din say jub legao lighet ja rehi thi is liye nehi beth seki or me bobby ghezel achi hai ab yehanm per sirf shiro ki zeban main baat kweraib gai but remember yeha per kisi ka gender beech main nehi aay ga we r human being no girl no boy ma reoli is piyar to jhota wada hai kub koi saath nibhata hai ahsaas dilakai chahet ka her shekhs juda ho ja ta hai thanks
axcelent mr booby kia ye app ki apni ghezel hai main ne pehlai ghor say nehi perhi thi ab offline perhi hain app ne waqi pori ghezel ka jewab diya hai kia ye app ki hai? ager hai to apni koshish ko jari rekhain yanee main meezeed bhejoongi app jewab di jai ga i like it app ne buhut achi likhi hai is trah word to word jewab dena buhut mushkil hai or sub say ziada haeret mujhe weha hoi haath pay zekhem walai sher per kai ye maina topic say hut ker likha tha kai bewefai ka shikwa ker tay kertay zekhem bhi aagiya yehan muhhe sehee nehi leg reha tha laikin app ki shairi perh kai mujhe leg reha hai kai meri ghezel anmool ho gai app ne buhut achi likhi hai apni shairi ki buhut tareefai suni hainn main laikin app ki shairi perh kai mujhe leg reha hai kain I m nothing kion kai ker na mushkil kaam nehi word to word jawab dena buhut mushkil hai thanks thanks thanks a lot
to app sai kis ne keha kai app yeha bethain jehan app ko legai kai ye app ki intresty ki bnatain hain wehan ja ker behai
mujhe devid bekhem or bach street boys kai]\ bare main main kuch bhi maloom nehi kai app kai topic per kisi kisim ka repli ker ti aikin zeroori nehi kai app ko jo topic pesend sub usi per baat kerain her ik ka apna taste ho ta app kisi per objection ker ne walai koi nehi ho tai
mr bobby appki shairi ka answer doon\ mera mutleb hai eg heseen chehrai walai ki tum ko dekh ker ye socha tha menai kai ab koi cvhehra in aankho main na bus sakai ga laikn kal bezar main ik chehra apne neqsh chor giya
ager ye pyar nehi to kia hai?
heseen chehro walo ka kia qosoor hai \ un sai sub dil legi kerai ik feryaad sunai hesen chehrai walaik ki soch ti hoon kai kis cheez ki kemi thi mujh main kai sub ka ho ker reha bus mera na hoa
Hey BOBby CONgrats MAN tumahri DIn raat ki KAWishon ka PHAl tumeh aaj mil hi gaya ;) KEEEp it UP BUddy ABHi tu MIR .DARd .Ghalib AUr buhat say baki hian HoPe u can MAKe Dat pOSssible ...sOpw do hArdwork ...my best wishes are alwayz be wid u !!! n MR oMEr oh So soRry MR OMer KHAN....poora tu nahi pata isi say guzara karlain :P for UR kind information this FORUm is FOr Students Especiallly Gulshanarian's so y Dun u DO ur work silently ....i mean web Uploadin etc etc not to interfere here yaar.... u re Quite inteligent enough to tell U but is this was FUNKy then u HAV to Put sum rules for dat we seriously doesnt INCLUDE ANY GHALIB OR MIR even ANY of them well SOrry to say but wat to Do agar rules rakh diye hotay kai STudents jiii yahan PAr ghalib aur MIR jii kai barey mian likhna PROHIBITED hia tu HUM Unhain kia aap ko bhi kuch nahi kehtay :)).!!!
hAN shayad app BOBBy ko khud say acha shair pa kar ...!!!! may be but BObby |z my Frend actuallly we hav same sections aur kafi dino say is say mulaqat hi nahi hui tu socha yahan reply kardoon shayad JAAg jaye :). postive logon ki duniya main yahan kuch negetvie log ab bhi rehtay hian :| i mean ab bhi baki hian :P ..lol !!!
plz mr cyrus ye app itna rude kion ho rehai hain main app say ler to nehi rehi or meri pechli post ka reason app ko peta hai is liye plzplzplz main yehan app sai ler nai nehi aai mujhe ghussa sehee aya tha or main ne jitni post ki thi ghussai main ki thi\ is liye plz forget it app jaisai new junior sai pehlai baat ker tai thai\
waisay hi kerai amin koi negative nehi sochti app ko leg reha ho ga but merai kuch rules hain or app hi to keh tai hai rules ko follow kero app hi ki baat beri fermandari asay pori ker rehi hoon wo bhi yeha pesend nehi
by the way yeh forum entertainment,info,aur debates ke liye hona chahiye. yahan to log apne ZATI masle discuss kerna shru ho jate hain,like cyrus and aneela. STOP IT GUYS
waisey aneela mere khayaal mein aap ne kuch ziada keh dya aap ki ghazal bhi achi thi aur na hee mein koi professional shaair hun na banney ka irada hai
and i ll welcome ne of ur contribution to answer but it ll take time, i have to prepare 4 exams as well
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Dont Stay....Forget our memories....Forget our possibilities....Take all your faithlessness with you....Just give me myself back and....Don't Stay
HEy aneela tuy mian kon sa aap say lar rha hoon mian tu BAs boBBy ko comment pass kar rha tha aap nay tu pata nahi baat ko kahan sSay kahan PHUncha DIya :S i dun how to realize u dat im NOT fighting W|D u mujhe spanish ya koi aur language nhai aati jo main Aap say kahon kai plzzz asia mat samjhain KAI CYRus aap say lar rha hai laraygha !!! U MAY PROCCCED ur rules Y Do i INvolve in IT ???
for chand chehra kisi ne khush guman benadiya tha hum ko chand sa chehra kah ker keh ne walai kion bhool giyae thay kai chand per gerhen bhi to ho ta hai
waisai jis chand ko gerhan nehi legta us kai liye meshwera hai kai chand sai chehrai ka sedqa bhi utara kijie mushwera hai ye meri jaan gewara kijie
nazar lagney chand ko lagta hai girhan na dekha karo yaaro chand ko itna doob keh mera chaand bhi us din se nazar nahin aayaa jis din se dekha us ki nazron mein doob keh
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Dont Stay....Forget our memories....Forget our possibilities....Take all your faithlessness with you....Just give me myself back and....Don't Stay
dheeray se jo bikhray rang qaus e qazah se kuch naqsh dil mein ubhrey teri yaadon ki hawa se ab aatey hain kyun yaad woh beetay huey pal hum kartey they baatein jab nainon ki zuban se
aaj aasman saja hai yun kaali ghata se keh tera mukhra dhaka ho zulfon ki rida se yun aansoo jhalak rahey hain teri aankhon mein goya shabnam chamak rahi ho phoolon peh subha se
zameen laraz rahi hai abre baaraan ki sada se bheeg raha hai mausam pal pal mein ada se yaad aatey ho tum aisey mein keh shayad ab bhi ummeed hai dil ko yaara tere waadon ki wafa se
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Dont Stay....Forget our memories....Forget our possibilities....Take all your faithlessness with you....Just give me myself back and....Don't Stay
YEH TOPIC MERI PASSAND KA HAI chalo ab mer taaza kalam sun lo kisqadar mujh ko satatey ho tum bhool janey per bhi yaad aatey ho tum sarad raton key sanaton mein merey dil ko bohat rulatey ho tum kabhi kabhi tu mehsoos hota hai mujhko mera nam bar bar duhratey ho tum barah tum ko bhoolna caha mein ney phir bhi har bar yaad aatey ho tum merey ishq ka wohi aalam hai ab tak aur is hal per hansey jatey ho tum jab bhi khuda sey kuch manga mein ney merey dil ki dua ban jatey ho tum mujhey in tanhayei key undheron mein kahan chord key jateey ho tum yaad tum ko meri aatie ho gi kyun ker dil ko behlatey ho tum
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